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Dear Sir,
As a student of this university, I feel obliged to make some suggestions regarding to our dormitories' basic conditions.On the whole, the dormitory building is located in a pleasant environment and is well-equipped. Nevertheless, some of its inside facilities are somewhat not convenient to us. In the first place,the dorms need to be furnished with better lighting system, for it doesn't work well sometimes, which causes inconvenience to us. Last but not least, the wardrobes are inadequate,and we don't have enough room to place clothes and books.I hope that you take my suggestions into serious considerations.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming